Fern is stumbling her words at everysingle line,she has facial expressions,her eye contact is good and the overal presentation was good so I WISH this group keeps up the good word
clear reading The words were clear and i understand every single word she said. Expressive reading They were tones,facial expressions,not as stiff as a robot and too many movement. posture and eye contact She did not stand straight at two of her lines but she looked confident and have some eye contact while reading script straight. Overall presentation I was entertained by her as she did the best from the group I wish she would not yell when the line don't yell fern as fern did not yelled
Fern (clear) clarity of speech(her voice was good but she is stumbling words) loudness(her loudness was good) speed(her reading speed is okay and normal) pronounciation(the words she read there is a little bit of stumbling) (expressive reading) tone(the voice was not chaged at all) facial(her facial expression was good) movements(the movments was great) (posture and eye contact) posture(the posture was good) confidence( their confidence was very good) eye contact(the eye contact was good) (overall presentation) (the presentation was entertaining and interesting)
-Clear Reading -clarity of speech-the words were clearly read,he had muffled at all times,but he was clear. -loudness-he was loud at all times. -speed-his speed was just right. -pronounciation-some of the words like fern you have to control yourself was not pronounced quite correctly.
-Expression Reading -tone-he had some change in the tone of the feeling only. -Facial Expressions-he only sometimes show the correct facial expressions of the feeling. -movements-there was movements,and also he looks natural too.
-Posture and Eye Contact -posture-the person was standing straight at all times. -confidence-he look shy while presenting. -eye contact-he did look at his fellow presenters while presenting.
Fern has very good eye contact and posture.she reads out her lines clearly.she was thinking bat the part after 'do away with it?'. mr arable must improve in his reading by learning words but not adding words. mrs arable has actions.she is always thinking before she reads out her lines.
Mrs. Arable I like the way she do her actions I wish she memories her script more so that she can look to the audience and to Fern I like the tone of her voice
i like their facial expression.
ReplyDeletei like their way of speaking.
i wish fern could improve in her loudness.
Fern is stumbling her words at everysingle line,she has facial expressions,her eye contact is good and the overal presentation was good so I WISH this group keeps up the good word
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ReplyDeleteclear reading
The words were clear and i understand every single word she said.
Expressive reading
They were tones,facial expressions,not as stiff as a robot and too many movement.
posture and eye contact
She did not stand straight at two of her lines but she looked confident and have some eye contact while reading script straight.
Overall presentation
I was entertained by her as she did the best from the group
I wish she would not yell when the line don't yell fern as fern did not yelled
Fern (clear)
ReplyDeleteclarity of speech(her voice was good but she is stumbling words)
loudness(her loudness was good)
speed(her reading speed is okay and normal)
pronounciation(the words she read there is a little bit of stumbling)
(expressive reading)
tone(the voice was not chaged at all)
facial(her facial expression was good)
movements(the movments was great)
(posture and eye contact)
posture(the posture was good)
confidence( their confidence was very good)
eye contact(the eye contact was good)
(overall presentation)
(the presentation was entertaining and interesting)
Mr Arable
ReplyDeleteClear Reading
clarity of speech-Mr Arable speech were muffled at fern,iknow alot more of.....
loudness-it was loud enough
speed-it was too fast until mr arable ate his word
pronounciation-it was not clear and not correct when he said you have to control yourselves...
Expressive Reading
tone-there was no changeing of tone in mr arable voice
facial expressions-there was some facial expressions at all
movement- there was some movement
posture and eye contact
posture- mr arable was standing straight
confidence-he look very confidence
eye contact he look at his fellow presenters
overall presentation-entertaining with some errors
Mr Arable
ReplyDelete-Clear Reading
-clarity of speech-the words were clearly read,he had muffled at all times,but he was clear.
-loudness-he was loud at all times.
-speed-his speed was just right.
-pronounciation-some of the words like fern you have to control yourself was not pronounced quite correctly.
-Expression Reading
-tone-he had some change in the tone of the feeling only.
-Facial Expressions-he only sometimes show the correct facial expressions of the feeling.
-movements-there was movements,and also he looks natural too.
-Posture and Eye Contact
-posture-the person was standing straight at all times.
-confidence-he look shy while presenting.
-eye contact-he did look at his fellow presenters while presenting.
the show was quite with some errors.
Mr arable make new words and forgot some words
ReplyDeleteFern has very good eye contact and posture.she reads out her lines clearly.she was thinking bat the part after 'do away with it?'.
ReplyDeletemr arable must improve in his reading by learning words but not adding words.
mrs arable has actions.she is always thinking before she reads out her lines.
thanks!
Deletei like the way mrs.arable express her feeling
ReplyDeleteI like their actions
ReplyDeleteI like their loudness and tones
I wish they could work on their facial expressions
I like their facial expressions.
ReplyDeleteI like their loudness.
i wish mr arable would pronounced the words correctly.
Mrs. Arable
ReplyDeleteI like the way she do her actions
I wish she memories her script more so that she can look to the audience and to Fern
I like the tone of her voice