Fern Clear Reading -clarity of speech:I wish Fern could be clearer at line'Just because it is smaller than the others?'. -loudness:I wish Fern could be louder at all the lines. -speed:I wish Fern could be slower at line 'Where's papa going with that ax?'. -pronounciation:I like the way Fern pronounced her all her lines. Expression Reading -tone: I wish Fern would not change her tone of voice according to feelings -facial expression:I wish Fern could have facial expression -movements:I wish Fern could have movements at all her lines. Posture and Eye Contact -posture:I like the way Fern is standing. -confidence:I like Fern's confidence. -eye contact:I wish Fern could have an eye contact to the audience and the person she is saying to.
mr arable clear reading: Clarity- i like mr arable reading. it was clear loudness-not loud enough at all time but its ok speed-it was just right pronounciation-there some words were eaten up
expressive tone-there was change a little bit of the words facial expession- there were facial express little bit :] movement- there is little of movement i wish there movement at some part
posture and eye contact posture-he was standing straight and not to casual confidence- he was not to shy eye contact-he look at fern when he was talking to fern and he look to the audience
overall pressentation it was dull at part fern control myself this is a matter of life and death and you talk about controlling my self but the other was ok
i wish fern dont close your face when talking and your voice was soft, i like the facial expression
-clarity of speech:I wish Fern could be clearer at line'Just because it is smaller than the others?'. -loudness:I wish Fern could be louder at all the lines. -speed:I wish Fern could be slower at line 'Where's papa going with that ax?'. -pronounciation:I like the way Fern pronounced her all her lines.
Expression Reading
-tone: I wish Fern would not change her tone of voice according to feelings -facial expression:I wish Fern could have facial expression -movements:I wish Fern could have movements at all her lines.
Posture and Eye Contact
-posture:I like the way Fern is standing. -confidence:I like Fern's confidence. -eye contact:I wish Fern could have an eye contact to the audience and the person she is saying to.
-clarity of speech:I wish Fern could be clearer at line'Just because it is smaller than the others?'. -loudness:I wish Fern could be louder at all the lines. -speed:I wish Fern could be slower at line 'Where's papa going with that ax?'. -pronounciation:I like the way Fern pronounced her all her lines.
Expression Reading
-tone: I wish Fern would not change her tone of voice according to feelings -facial expression:I wish Fern could have facial expression -movements:I wish Fern could have movements at all her lines.
Posture and Eye Contact
posture:I like the way Fern is standing. -confidence:I like Fern's confidence. -eye contact:I wish Fern could have an eye contact to the audience and the person she is saying to.
.Clarity of speech-the words was clear .Loudness-it was very soft .speed-it was just right .pronounciation- Mrs.Arable was just right Expressive reading
.tone-it change a bit when it's time to shout .facial expressions-it didn't have any facial expressions .movements-Mrs.Arable didn't do any movements Posture and Eye contact
.Posture-Mrs.Arable was standing straight .confidence-Mrs.Arable was a bit confident .eye contact-Mrs.Arable didn't have any eye contact to the audience Overall Presentation
.it was a dull but there are few errors for fern 1 wish and 2 star
.I wish that Mrs.Arable will be louder and do some facial expression and movements .I wish that Mrs.Arable have eye contact to the audience .I Mrs.Arable is words are clear and I can hear it
Mrs.Arable I wish his voice would be louder because I cannot what his talking about I like the way he look at Fern I wish he put more facial expression and actions
i sound really soft
ReplyDeleteI like the way they read with feelings
ReplyDeleteI wish Samson could have eye contact and sound a bit louder
i wish fern can put the paper low a bit
ReplyDeletei wish mrs arable can be louder
i like the yelling and shouting fron fern
i like mr arable loudness.
ReplyDeletei wish fern would be louder.
Fern
ReplyDeleteClear Reading
-clarity of speech:I wish Fern could be clearer at line'Just because it is smaller than the others?'.
-loudness:I wish Fern could be louder at all the lines.
-speed:I wish Fern could be slower at line 'Where's papa going with that ax?'.
-pronounciation:I like the way Fern pronounced her all her lines.
Expression Reading
-tone: I wish Fern would not change her tone of voice according to feelings
-facial expression:I wish Fern could have facial expression
-movements:I wish Fern could have movements at all her lines.
Posture and Eye Contact
-posture:I like the way Fern is standing.
-confidence:I like Fern's confidence.
-eye contact:I wish Fern could have an eye contact to the audience and the person she is saying to.
mr arable
ReplyDeleteclear reading:
Clarity- i like mr arable reading. it was clear
loudness-not loud enough at all time but its ok
speed-it was just right
pronounciation-there some words were eaten up
expressive
tone-there was change a little bit of the words
facial expession- there were facial express little bit :]
movement- there is little of movement i wish there movement at some part
posture and eye contact
posture-he was standing straight and not to casual
confidence- he was not to shy
eye contact-he look at fern when he was talking to fern and he look to the audience
overall pressentation
it was dull at part fern control myself this is a matter of life and death and you talk about controlling my self
but the other was ok
i wish fern dont close your face when talking
and your voice was soft, i like the facial expression
Fern
ReplyDeleteClear Reading
-clarity of speech:I wish Fern could be clearer at line'Just because it is smaller than the others?'.
-loudness:I wish Fern could be louder at all the lines.
-speed:I wish Fern could be slower at line 'Where's papa going with that ax?'.
-pronounciation:I like the way Fern pronounced her all her lines.
Expression Reading
-tone: I wish Fern would not change her tone of voice according to feelings
-facial expression:I wish Fern could have facial expression
-movements:I wish Fern could have movements at all her lines.
Posture and Eye Contact
-posture:I like the way Fern is standing.
-confidence:I like Fern's confidence.
-eye contact:I wish Fern could have an eye contact to the audience and the person she is saying to.
Fern
ReplyDeleteClear Reading
-clarity of speech:I wish Fern could be clearer at line'Just because it is smaller than the others?'.
-loudness:I wish Fern could be louder at all the lines.
-speed:I wish Fern could be slower at line 'Where's papa going with that ax?'.
-pronounciation:I like the way Fern pronounced her all her lines.
Expression Reading
-tone: I wish Fern would not change her tone of voice according to feelings
-facial expression:I wish Fern could have facial expression
-movements:I wish Fern could have movements at all her lines.
Posture and Eye Contact
posture:I like the way Fern is standing.
-confidence:I like Fern's confidence.
-eye contact:I wish Fern could have an eye contact to the audience and the person she is saying to.
Mrs.Arable
ReplyDeleteClear reading
.Clarity of speech-the words was clear
.Loudness-it was very soft
.speed-it was just right
.pronounciation- Mrs.Arable was just right
Expressive reading
.tone-it change a bit when it's time to shout
.facial expressions-it didn't have any facial expressions
.movements-Mrs.Arable didn't do any movements
Posture and Eye contact
.Posture-Mrs.Arable was standing straight
.confidence-Mrs.Arable was a bit confident
.eye contact-Mrs.Arable didn't have any eye contact to the audience
Overall Presentation
.it was a dull but there are few errors for fern
1 wish and 2 star
.I wish that Mrs.Arable will be louder and do some facial expression and movements
.I wish that Mrs.Arable have eye contact to the audience
.I Mrs.Arable is words are clear and I can hear it
i like the way they read feelings
ReplyDeleteI wish Samson would slow down at the start
ReplyDeleteI wish Umair would be louder
I like the way Anthony changed his tone at the last part
I like fern's facial expressions.
ReplyDeleteI like mr arable's reading,as he reads his lines well.
I wish fern and mrs arable would be more louder.
Mrs.Arable
ReplyDeleteI wish his voice would be louder because I cannot what his talking about
I like the way he look at Fern
I wish he put more facial expression and actions