Sufiah has a great model to be as Fern.She is very confident with her character.I wish Sufiah could built up more of her pronounciations has she have difficulty in words. I wish Eliza could built up her confidence even better.I like the way she express her feelings... I wish Lean could be more louder.I like the way shelet out her feelings as Ms. Arable.
Clear Reading -clarity of speech -the words were clearly read -loudness -the loudness was just right -speed -it was just right for all the lines
Expressive reading -tone -there was a change of tone at the line Don't yell Fern..... -facial expression -facial expression is correct except for the line don't yell Fern could show more feelings -movement -there are a lot movements which made it natural
Posture and eye contact -posture -she was standing straight all the time which looked natural -confidence -she looked confident while presenting -eye contact -always looking at Fern while presenting.
Overall Presentation -I enjoy watching them it was very entertaing
Clear Reading -clarity of speech-the words are clearly read, the words that she say was quite clear. -loudness-eliza say the litter of pigs was not loud enough -speed-she is too fast at a weakling makes trouble now run along. -pronounciation-she pronounced all the words properly
Expressive Reading -tone-there was not much change in the tone according to the feelings. -facial expressions-the facial expressions of the line fern you need to learn to control yourself did not show the correct feeling of the person. -movements-there was movements and look natural.
-Posture and Eye Contact -Posture- was gd and natural. -confidence-the person look confident while presenting. -eye contact- the person was reading straight from the script, but did not look at the audience but she looked at his fellow presenters while presenting.
I like the way they look at each other when their talking I like their loudness and their lines were clearly read I wish Lean and Eliza has more facial expressions
-clarity of speech-her words was clearly read -loudness-her loudness wasn't that loud enough, she has to practice the part that Fern you to learn to control yourself. -speed-her was just right and she didn't eat her words. -pronounciation-her pronciation is quite good, I think she could maintain the pronounciation.
Expresive Reading
-tone-there was no change in the tone of voice according to the feelings. -facial expressions- her facial expressions did not show the correct feelings.
Mr Arable Clear reading -clarity of speech-her words was clearly read -loudness-her loudness wasn't that loud enough, she has to practice the part that Fern you to learn to control yourself. -speed-her was just right and she didn't eat her words. -pronounciation-her pronciation is quite good, I think she could maintain the pronounciation. Expresive Reading -tone-there was no change in the tone of voice according to the feelings. -facial expressions- her facial expressions did not show the correct feelings. -movement-
I like fern's facial expressions and her loudness. I like their readings as they read their lines clearly. I wish eliza and lean would have more facial expressions.
Sufiah has a great model to be as Fern.She is very confident with her character.I wish Sufiah could built up more of her pronounciations has she have difficulty in words.
ReplyDeleteI wish Eliza could built up her confidence even better.I like the way she express her feelings...
I wish Lean could be more louder.I like the way shelet out her feelings as Ms. Arable.
Mrs.Arable
ReplyDeleteClear Reading
-clarity of speech -the words were clearly read
-loudness -the loudness was just right
-speed -it was just right for all the lines
Expressive reading
-tone -there was a change of tone at the line Don't yell Fern.....
-facial expression -facial expression is correct except for the line don't yell Fern could show more feelings
-movement -there are a lot movements which made it natural
Posture and eye contact
-posture -she was standing straight all the time which looked natural
-confidence -she looked confident while presenting
-eye contact -always looking at Fern while presenting.
Overall Presentation
-I enjoy watching them it was very entertaing
mr arable
ReplyDeleteClear Reading
-clarity of speech-the words are clearly read, the words that she say was quite clear.
-loudness-eliza say the litter of pigs was not loud enough
-speed-she is too fast at a weakling makes trouble now run along.
-pronounciation-she pronounced all the words properly
Expressive Reading
-tone-there was not much change in the tone according to the feelings.
-facial expressions-the facial expressions of the line fern you need to learn to control yourself did not show the correct feeling of the person.
-movements-there was movements and look natural.
-Posture and Eye Contact
-Posture- was gd and natural.
-confidence-the person look confident while presenting.
-eye contact- the person was reading straight from the script, but did not look at the audience but she looked at his fellow presenters while presenting.
it was interesting and nice.
theer of them are clear and loud
ReplyDeleteI like Fern's facial expression and actions.
ReplyDeleteI like the way they look at each other when their talking
ReplyDeleteI like their loudness and their lines were clearly read
I wish Lean and Eliza has more facial expressions
Mr Arable
ReplyDeleteClear reading
-clarity of speech-her words was clearly read
-loudness-her loudness wasn't that loud enough, she has to practice the part that Fern you to learn to control yourself.
-speed-her was just right and she didn't eat her words.
-pronounciation-her pronciation is quite good, I think she could maintain the pronounciation.
Expresive Reading
-tone-there was no change in the tone of voice according to the feelings.
-facial expressions- her facial expressions did not show the correct feelings.
Mr Arable
ReplyDeleteClear reading
-clarity of speech-her words was clearly read
-loudness-her loudness wasn't that loud enough, she has to practice the part that Fern you to learn to control yourself.
-speed-her was just right and she didn't eat her words.
-pronounciation-her pronciation is quite good, I think she could maintain the pronounciation.
Expresive Reading
-tone-there was no change in the tone of voice according to the feelings.
-facial expressions- her facial expressions did not show the correct feelings.
-movement-
I like fern's facial expressions and her loudness.
ReplyDeleteI like their readings as they read their lines clearly.
I wish eliza and lean would have more facial expressions.