clarity of speech- was clearly read loudness- was loud enough in every line speed- speed is just right pronounciation- the words were pronounced correctly
Expressive Reading tone -there was a good change of tone facial expressions- i wish that there is more facial expression"allright i wiil let u start it ona bottle like a baby then you'll see what trouble a pig can be." movementse were movements it is natural
Posture and EYE Contact posture- was standing straight confidence- was quite confident and not shy eye contact- was looking at the audience and at the person who she or he was talking
Overall Presentation it was very entertaning
she could had been improved in this line"fern you have to learn to control yoursel"
- Clarity of speech: Words were cleary read. - Loudness: Could be louder at this part'....the pig would probably die anyway.' - Speed: Speed is just right. - Pronounciation: All the words were pronounced correctly.
Expressive reading: - Tone: The tone is okay..But it could change more at '..so your father has decided to do away with it' - Facial expressions:Your facial expressions did not show the correct feelings. - Movements: There was no movement at all.You could practise on the movement.
Posture and eye contact: - Posture: She had good posture and was standing straight. - Confident: Looks abit shy but still has confidence. - Eye contact: i wish Mrs. Arable could look at the audience more.
Overall Presentation: - It was Very entertaing. All of them look good together.
-Clear Reading -clarity of speech-she read the words clearly. -loudness-she speak loud enough. -speed-just right. -pronounciation-she prounounced all the words correctly.
-Expression Reading -tone-there was a change in the tone of voice. -facial expressions-she did the correct facial expressions of the feelings. -movements-she have did some movements.
-Posture and Eye contact -posture-she was standing straight. -confidence-she look confidence while presenting. -eye contact-the person look at her fellow presenters while presenting.
Fern. clear reading clarity of speech-the words are very clear loudness-i wish fern should increase the loudness of her voice when she says "do away with it"it shows unhappy. speed-your speed is just right at all the point. pronounciation-the words were pronounced clearly and she did not eat her words up. Epressive reading tone-fern tone did not change according to the feelings,the part 'do away with it". facial expressions-she did not show the facial expressions when she is angry,upset and shock.her facial expressions were normal. movements-it looks natural because only some part she did her movements. posture and eye contact posture-fern was standing straight.only her hands and her head was moving. confidence-she look confident and she did not move around to show her nervous as she present. eye contact-she look at her friends and the audience while presenting. overall presentation it was very entertainig. all of them look good together.
My voice really change a lot.....weird......
ReplyDeletei like their facial expression.
ReplyDeletei like their pronounciation.
i wish they could do some action.
mr arable s words were clearly read
ReplyDeletemr arables voice was loud
ReplyDelete-loudness
claririty of speech- were clearly read
ReplyDeleteMr Arable
ReplyDeleteClear Reading
clarity of speech- was clearly read
loudness- was loud enough in every line
speed- speed is just right
pronounciation- the words were pronounced correctly
Expressive Reading
tone -there was a good change of tone
facial expressions- i wish that there is more facial expression"allright i wiil let u start it ona bottle like a baby then you'll see what trouble a pig can be."
movementse were movements it is natural
Posture and EYE Contact
posture- was standing straight
confidence- was quite confident and not shy
eye contact- was looking at the audience and at the person who she or he was talking
Overall Presentation
it was very entertaning
she could had been improved in this line"fern you have to learn to control yoursel"
Mrs. Arable
ReplyDeleteClear reading:
- Clarity of speech: Words were cleary read.
- Loudness: Could be louder at this part'....the pig would probably die anyway.'
- Speed: Speed is just right.
- Pronounciation: All the words were pronounced correctly.
Expressive reading:
- Tone: The tone is okay..But it could change more at '..so your father has decided to do away with it'
- Facial expressions:Your facial expressions did not show the correct feelings.
- Movements: There was no movement at all.You could practise on the movement.
Posture and eye contact:
- Posture: She had good posture and was standing straight.
- Confident: Looks abit shy but still has confidence.
- Eye contact: i wish Mrs. Arable could look at the audience more.
Overall Presentation:
- It was Very entertaing. All of them look good together.
Mr Arable
ReplyDelete-Clear Reading
-clarity of speech-she read the words clearly.
-loudness-she speak loud enough.
-speed-just right.
-pronounciation-she prounounced all the words correctly.
-Expression Reading
-tone-there was a change in the tone of voice.
-facial expressions-she did the correct facial expressions of the feelings.
-movements-she have did some movements.
-Posture and Eye contact
-posture-she was standing straight.
-confidence-she look confidence while presenting.
-eye contact-the person look at her fellow presenters while presenting.
i think the show was entertaining.
Fern.
ReplyDeleteclear reading
clarity of speech-the words are very clear
loudness-i wish fern should increase the loudness of her voice when she says "do away with it"it shows unhappy.
speed-your speed is just right at all the point.
pronounciation-the words were pronounced clearly and she did not eat her words up.
Epressive reading
tone-fern tone did not change according to the feelings,the part 'do away with it".
facial expressions-she did not show the facial expressions when she is angry,upset and shock.her facial expressions were normal.
movements-it looks natural because only some part she did her movements.
posture and eye contact
posture-fern was standing straight.only her hands and her head was moving.
confidence-she look confident and she did not move around to show her nervous as she present.
eye contact-she look at her friends and the audience while presenting.
overall presentation
it was very entertainig. all of them look good together.
I like mr arable's facial expressions.
ReplyDeleteI lke mr arable's loudness.
I wish fern would have more facial expressions.