clarity of speech:the words that was read by Fern was clearly read. loudness:it was good.But she may improve on her loudness.LIKE'Please don't kill it!Its unfair.' speed:when she read her lines,some part were fast.like'where's papa going with that ax?' pronounciatian:Fern's lines were pronounced perfectly.
Expressive Reading tone:there was a change of tone but some parts was the same.like'Do away with it?You mean Kill it?Just beacause its smaller than the others?; Facial Expressions:the facial expressions was done perfectly. movements:there was movements from Fern.when she was supposed to be asking a question she was wondering
Posture and Eye Contact posture:She was standing straight at all times. confidence:Fern was very confident with her character and is always ready for her turn. eye contact:Fern have good eye contact with the audience.At some points she was reading her script.
Mr. Arable: Clear Reading -Clarity of Speech- The second line,''Fern, I know alot more about rasing a litter of pigs then you do. A weakling makes trouble. Now run along!'' of Mr. Arable was muffled and not clear. -Loudness-Wasn't so loud to hear -Speed-Just right -Pronounciation-A few words were not pronounced corretly
Expressive Reading -Tone-No change of tone of voice according to feelings -Facial Expressions-Did not show the correct feeling -Movements-There was movement and kind of looked natural
Posture And Eye Contact -Posture-He looked straight most of the time -Confidence-Kind of confident -Eye Contact-He looked at the audience,at his presenters and wasn't reading straight from the script
Overall Presentation -Entertaining with some errors
Mr Arable -Clear Reading -clarity of speech-his reading was not clear. -loudness-he was not loud at all times starting at fern, i know a lot more about raising a litter of pigs than you do. -speed-his speed was just right. -pronounciation-the words are not pronounced properly at the beggining of fern, you have to learn to control yourself.
-Expression reading -tone-there was no change of voice according to the feelings. -facial expressions-he did not show the correct facial expressions according to the feeling. -movements-he has shown feelings.
-Posture and Eye Contact -posture-he was standing straight. -confidence-he look shy while presenting. -eye contact he was reading straight from the script,but he did not look at the audience. i think the show was a little bit dull.
-clarity of speech-Some of the words are muffled and not clear -loudness-At the part of saying"Some pigs were born last night" it was a bit soft i cant hear it properly -speed-It was just enough -pronounciation-the words was pronounced correctly
Expressive Reading
-tone-when she say the word "Dont yell,Fern!"She did not shout -facial expression-she show the correct feelings specially in the "Well one of the pigs is a runt" i like her facial expression there -movements-her movements was right
Posture and Eye contact
-posture-When its not her turn she dont move but she show facial expression and I like it -confidence-at the last part she was covering her face using the paper because she was laughing -eye contact-she only look at Fern she did not look at the audience she only look at the audience when its not her turn.
i like their facial expression.
ReplyDeletei like fern action.
i wish they could stop laughing and mrs arable could be louder.
Fern]
ReplyDeleteClear Reading
clarity of speech:the words that was read by Fern was clearly read.
loudness:it was good.But she may improve on her loudness.LIKE'Please don't kill it!Its unfair.'
speed:when she read her lines,some part were fast.like'where's papa going with that ax?'
pronounciatian:Fern's lines were pronounced perfectly.
Expressive Reading
tone:there was a change of tone but some parts was the same.like'Do away with it?You mean Kill it?Just beacause its smaller than the others?;
Facial Expressions:the facial expressions was done perfectly.
movements:there was movements from Fern.when she was supposed to be asking a question she was wondering
Posture and Eye Contact
posture:She was standing straight at all times.
confidence:Fern was very confident with her character and is always ready for her turn.
eye contact:Fern have good eye contact with the audience.At some points she was reading her script.
it was entertaining but with some errors.
Mr. Arable:
ReplyDeleteClear Reading
-Clarity of Speech- The second line,''Fern, I know alot more about rasing a litter of pigs then you do. A weakling makes trouble. Now run along!'' of Mr. Arable was muffled and not clear.
-Loudness-Wasn't so loud to hear
-Speed-Just right
-Pronounciation-A few words were not pronounced corretly
Expressive Reading
-Tone-No change of tone of voice according to feelings
-Facial Expressions-Did not show the correct feeling
-Movements-There was movement and kind of looked natural
Posture And Eye Contact
-Posture-He looked straight most of the time
-Confidence-Kind of confident
-Eye Contact-He looked at the audience,at his presenters and wasn't reading straight from the script
Overall Presentation
-Entertaining with some errors
Mr Arable
ReplyDelete-Clear Reading
-clarity of speech-his reading was not clear.
-loudness-he was not loud at all times starting at fern, i know a lot more about raising a litter of pigs than you do.
-speed-his speed was just right.
-pronounciation-the words are not pronounced properly at the beggining of fern, you have to learn to control yourself.
-Expression reading
-tone-there was no change of voice according to the feelings.
-facial expressions-he did not show the correct facial expressions according to the feeling.
-movements-he has shown feelings.
-Posture and Eye Contact
-posture-he was standing straight.
-confidence-he look shy while presenting.
-eye contact he was reading straight from the script,but he did not look at the audience.
i think the show was a little bit dull.
even they are a little bit laughing,but they are still continued!good try!
ReplyDeleteMrs.Arable
ReplyDeleteClear Reading
-clarity of speech-Some of the words are muffled and not clear
-loudness-At the part of saying"Some pigs were born last night" it was a bit soft i cant hear it properly
-speed-It was just enough
-pronounciation-the words was pronounced correctly
Expressive Reading
-tone-when she say the word "Dont yell,Fern!"She did not shout
-facial expression-she show the correct feelings specially in the "Well one of the pigs is a runt" i like her facial expression there
-movements-her movements was right
Posture and Eye contact
-posture-When its not her turn she dont move but she show facial expression and I like it
-confidence-at the last part she was covering her face using the paper because she was laughing
-eye contact-she only look at Fern she did not look at the audience she only look at the audience when its not her turn.
I like fern's facial expressions.
ReplyDeleteI like mrs arable facial expressions.
I wish mr arable would say his lines properly.